Reviews for Open Unto the Fields

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Evil-Frolicing-Angel 2003-10-16 ch 1,	abuseIt's so good Sniff But so sad as well... =:{ You inspire me!
aulliana 2003-07-06 ch 1,	abuseA slightly sad but enjoyable read... I'm sure the song sounds wonderful!
Misty Woods 2003-06-10 ch 1,	abuseThis is really interesting. I must say that you have written an excellent poem based on rabbits' viewpoints. Knowing how animals view the world around them is a good change. It's sad how humans torture rabbits, isn't it? I can tell you really love rabbits and nature. Me too! :)
Aftertaste of a Razorblade 2003-05-17 ch 1,	abuseI like this! ^_^
Devious Angel XDemon 2003-05-12 ch 1,	abuseI liked this! It was really really good. My friend would prolly sing...better not show her it blink ^__^; - The right to those who wander my halls, shower me with gold and worship that of my name. I call thyself...Human. ~Engel Wachter.
Morgan le Fay 2003-04-27 ch 1, anon.	abuseFolk ballad(ish)! Great! Wonderful! Obsessed folkie on the loose! Sorry. I liked it. Then again, I like folk ballads, so let's keep a bit of perspective here. But it was a good ballad, and I've read a lot worse. (Hark back to the infamous Poetry Club at my high school.) I can see inspiration (be it small) from Watership Down.
disheartenedwolf 2003-04-26 ch 1,	abuseThankyou for your review, and I must say..your song is very calming and descriptive. I loved it. It kind of made me think up of my own tune to go with your lyrics. I never knew you could do so much with rabbits. Poor rabbits. poo.=(
Just Wolf 2003-04-25 ch 1,	abuseThat was very well done. It did strongly remind me of a folk ballad, yet it was almost overpoweringly beautiful. The "we're Rabbits - we know..." worked amazingly and made some very strong ending lines.
Byrdde 2003-04-17 ch 1,	abuseWell, I was playing Celtic jigs in the background when I read this and, while I'm sure it's much more upbeat than this was ever intended to be, I certainly see how well it works as a ballad. I really enjoy your style (in this as well as the other poems of yours I've read) - the flow is very original and the rhyme schemes are nicely inconspicuous. And, oh, the poor rabbits! We have tons in our neighborhood, and I can't imagine anyone doing something like that to hurt them...:(
Cindy Moon 2003-04-17 ch 1,	abuseI am so honored to have a review from someone of your age/experience. ^^ Thank you kindly, this high school student has now higher self-confidence. "Open Unto the Fields" would actually make a great song! I tried analyzing it for more of a critique, but I'm at a loss for finding flaws. It's quite interesting when you read this piece from a more figurative perspective. -Cindy Moon *)
aleppine 2003-04-14 ch 1,	abuseThis is really well-written, but then again that seems to be nothing new in your account. Use of repetition at the end of each verse is nice - 'we are rabbits - we know ... etc'. I think the main thing that strikes me about this is the idea rather than the actual writing itself ... a song about rabbits? Why hasn't anyone else done it yet??!
Talia Falcon 2003-04-08 ch 1,	abuseI don't even like rabbits, and I like this!
RainShadow2005 2003-04-07 ch 1,	abuseI'm not good at critiquing songs, so I don't have much constructive critisism for this. I liked it a lot and didn't find any rough spots. I could imagine strong-willed rabbits singing this in pride. Very good word choices.
Terra Tigra 2003-03-30 ch 1,	abuseVery nice poem/song. Really great rhyme scheme and flow. Thumbs! I love rabbits ^.^ They're so cute but this song makes me really sad. I live out in the country and I see rabbits every once in a while (sometimes you have to look hard though, hehe). I think its so great to see them but I also know that there are people who live in this area who set traps and shoot them. That makes me really sad and angery. I can tell you really love rabbits, I'm just glad someone does. I have seen your pen name everywhere (or so it would seem) in reviews, posting, what-not. So, I thought I would come and see what you are all about. Very nice poem/song. Arrivederci! -Terra Tigra-
Sailor Sol 2003-03-27 ch 1,	abuseWow, this is really good. Interesting point of view, but really good!

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