it's so true... i write things all the time that i love, and then a week later i sit and look at it and think to myself, what utter crap. i like the straightforward attitude here, very nice, keep writing!

I always consider myself deep until a month later when I realize that I never really knew what I thought I knew and that I'll probably never know what I want to know. Nice poem.

Heh, aren't we all a bit pretentious, though, sticking our work up here and assuming people are going to read it?

Awesome.


~Heart of the Sword

Nobody's prefect. Sigh..
But hey, I like this!

good describtions, very creative, I love the way this artist is thinking

interesting with great imagry, pretty, nicely done

oh. nice.

Nice.

Hee hee. But you're not pretentious, certainly nowhere near as pretentious as I am. The very fact that you wrote this poem shows that.

This is really good. J'aime il.