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| PainKiller 2003-06-28 ch 1,  | abuseI liked this poem. Short, but well written. The line beginning with "Is it Indescision?" was very good. One thing though. You had a few punctuation errors. In a story, you can get away with it. In a poem, it's more obvious. Just proof your poem, and it would give it a much more professional look. Otherwise, this is very good work. |
| Needa S 2003-03-23 ch 1, | abuseWhen ya find that special someone you will know that it is indeed love! Awesome job! Keep writing... |