Hello again :) Will you be finishing this story anytime soon?

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O.o besides the skipped "lemon" Good Job :DD I really Cantt WAIT! I wished that He wouldnt kill her though and they just could live in the human World :P

I like this story but I wish you didnt put a "lemon"
>.< I skip over those parts but good job so far

please, please, please update. i think i would go insane if a didn't know how this story ended. will Ashly end up with Jerome?

Wow...That's all I have to say.
You are doing an A-M-A-Z-I-N-G job on this story.

He mind-** her so well; it made ME breathless. I swear I didn't take one, single breath till the end of the chapter.

Keep writing; I'm addicted!

I absolutely love this story...but its kind of hard to enjoy it as much as possible when you have your chapters mixed up...they arent in order..just thought id inform you of that...when ever you get them back in order correctly please tell me so i can continue reading without so much confusion and headache lol

-Caya
P.S: if you get a chance, check out my story Cat and mouse and tell me what you think please

Wow, what an amazing story

But of all guy names in the world why JEROME.

No offense but it doesn't sound sexy at all to me contrasting heavily with his appearance

Maybe I should make y own name for him and pretend thats what he's called

Oh...fascinating. Nicole seems so sweet.

PLEASE UPDATE i have read all of your fics and this is totally your best one and i am so addicted to it. so please, please update because jerome is so awesome. and i really need to know what is going to happen.

if you do, i'll give you some magic pixie dust. (:

hey, i like your story! I think your grammar and punctuation leaves much room for improvement, though, e.g. there should be a comma in front and behind "really", in chapter 20, the 6th sentence. Also, it should be "he should have known better than to be shocked (that) she'd fainted", cause without the "that", the sentence structure is erroneous.

I'd list more, but I'm bored and I'm going off to read more fics. TATA!!
Anyway, i hope you update soon! BYE!

jellyfish

Oh, please update soon!

Its really good! Please update soon.

love the updates. cant wait for the next one.

please please please please update! it doesnt even have to be this story, anything!

I love your story, though I hope you'll update soon. It keeps on reminding me of Greek mythology, the myth of Hades and Persephone.

And I can't help but sympathize with Jerome...