Girl Holla Back dont blush. This poem of your is off the heezie. Please read my poem foolish if yah get a chance. Good Job.
Well Buh Byez

Woah!This is really different for you. you don't usually write poems like these. It was OK overall, but I really liked the last lines, they were good! Keep writing, wishing you many reviews, Amberose.

Also, More Cat and Turtle!!I worked really ** chapter four, and I really like it. Please read when you have time, and leave a review!

Nice simplistic poem. I have no complaints with it, though it doesn't seem to express a hot of true emotion. Can't put my finger on what's missing though.

Wow
kewl poem:)
keep on writing