Okay, you didn't research enough. Over fifteen thousand passengers died? NO! There were only 2,224 passengers on board! You MEANT 1,500. NOT 15,0! BIG HUGE Difference. But I liked this. I had to bust you for that. That was uncool, man. You're a poet, I must say, but you either don't know how to pronounce numbers, or you just saw the 15 and put down a thousand because it sounds cool. Hahahaha I'm just kidding with you. Seriously, it was a great poem. I enjoyed reading it. It was powerful.

the beginning parts didn't have a blending rhythm, but it got better in the end. very nice.

I think it's wonderful that you wrote a poem in memory of all those who were lost when the Titanic sank. And like someone said, you've got all your facts straight which is even better. Nice job!

Good research there... what about the passangers picked up by the Carpathia et al.?

I like this poem's rhyme and rhythm ... especially the first two lines. Nicely done. :)

good poem dont pull yourself down over it. keep it up