Yes... hem, oui! ^^ C'est très clair. Simple et clair.

Sad, and doesn't need to be longer. Beautifully sad...

I can't believe you are able to write this much and I am sorry I don't understand French that well, otherwise I could review your other stuff...

Short, simple yet strong already!

Good!

It's hard for me to understand your pain for it's not mine. But I have certainly felt the sadness behind every word of it. Beautiful.

I can feel that as well, it's a great pain. No matter how hard you tried to stomach it in, it's difficult, and it finds its way through and tears fall.

~DW

Its ok, though you could have made it longer.

That was so beautiful... and I could feel your sadness... can you r&r my stuff? Thanks...