Well written with a lot of deep meaning in here...Ahh, sweet temptation and not to give in...it's a hard job!

Another in this case longer and good poem!

This one is very well written... I really felt that your works deserved more attention and read. I'd be checking out on all your works soon. :o)

~DW

that's great. i love the way you talk about evrey single temptation in life, without mentioning anything specific. good, GOOD job.