the first half of this is great - good words and straightforward. good work on the layout but be careful you have the words to back it up - making cool designs with poetry only works if the poetry is great (i have a habit of doing the same - not fully supporting my structure).
otherwise, good stuff! too bad i don't read french or i could read more of your stuff.
keep writing!

I like the way you play with the meaning of the words and formatting it down...So simple, but tres tres bien!

I like it!
Write more!

This is one of the most unique poems I've read. Très Beau! (My french is rubbish, so pard me!)

It looks good, and reads great!

~DW

This is good, and the style (the hourglass) I never seen that done here. It looks good. And the Poem.. I loved it.

I'm no genius meaning i don't know the science to the way that's done... but not only does it look good, it 's touching too. Pretty angsty stuff