Reviews for Unexpected Royalty

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For What Its Worth 2008-12-01 ch 17,	If you publish it, will you publish it under the same name? I would love to read the book if/when it is published. My email address is , or Aevanyll.. I am curious, though, as to what changes you will make to the story. If my input is welcome, then I would say that I really liked the parts with Charlie's friends and fellow federal agents. Particularly after she disappeared. Her friend Barnes specifically and 'Eli', the teacher that so closely matches the description of her father, are very intriguing. As she was an FBI agent, they are probably still looking for her and her attackers/kidnappers. It would be interesting to see if they ever really realize Gandoff was never an agent, or if Charlie was in on it.
songlawyer 2008-12-01 ch 17,	I absolutely love this story and sincerely hope that you will post if this story is published. You could just repost chapter 17 with a note saying that it has been put out in book stores and that way, anybody who has added this story to their alerts list can know right away because they will get the little email thingy. You have amazing technique and your ideas are so original and complex that I can really feel like I am there in her kingdom. Charlie is also really authentic because she fits the profile exactly of somebody who has been dragged from earth into this totally new world. I hope you get published soon because I cannot wait to find out what happens, especially since we have just seen that Queen Viola is in the other room from the evil guy and his little cronies. Anyway, awesome story!
Phoebs 2008-11-09 ch 1,	Reading your story has been a joy. Charlie is just a blast and so is Gandoff. I wish you the best in getting this publish because I will definitely go get the book if it's out. I need to know what happens! Anyway, when you get all famous, please don't forget the little people here. Lol.
Dark Auro 2008-11-01 ch 17,	Although I hate the fact the story won't be finished soon, I think it's worth the wait if I can buy the book instead. Good Luck and may you have great success in publishing your book! I've been reading this story ever since I joined Hopefully you could send me progress on the story being published so it would be easier for me to track down. I'd be extremely grateful if you could give brief updates on teh status. Thanks and once again good luck, it's an awsome strory so I'm sure you'll have no difficulties whatsoever getting it published.
dayna 2008-11-01 ch 17,	Everyone will miss your story on here! But good luck with getting it published! I would LOVE to see this in print :)
Evenstar1389 2008-10-27 ch 1,	can i have email updates plzplz jocelyntan89 {at} I'm in University now too and it's driving me up the wall haha... i understand how busy you are. But still quite dejected at a loss of a great story wail
Evenstar1389 2008-10-27 ch 17,	oh no ive been waiting eons for this story and it's gone... I know JC Jaquez took Firebird off fp and i havent heard hide or hair about it since, and it's such a pity because i like to read awesome stories over and over again =( I'd have love to know what happens to Gandoff and Charlie next =( And i'm sure Eli is an Albonian native...
Oesus 2008-10-25 ch 17,	i would love email updates! riotingforpeace at gmail (:
Dragen Eyez 2008-10-23 ch 17,	While I am sad that you won't be continuing the put the story up here, I'm thrilled that you're still working on it and editing. This is a brilliant story, and I hope very much to see it published--it'll be one of the rare books I would actually buy and not just borrow from the library. I'd love the email updates (dragen _ eyez at hotmail. com). You seem so motivated, and excited--its' great to see, and I would be terribly disappointed if you hadn't continued this. When it gets published I want a signed copy! haha. I will miss getting to review though--I love talking to some of the authors, y'know? I should stop rambling. Also, would it bug you terribly if I sent you an email at some point? I make random friends that way, sometimes, and I always wanted to send one your way, but never did for some reason... Anyway, I wish you luck and success!
wei 2008-10-23 ch 17,	I hope you get it published soon! )
melissa 2008-10-22 ch 17,	Please do let us know when upubish this book! I love it!
DJ Lee 2008-10-22 ch 17,	Well, I can't say that it's exactly bad news since you're still working on the story and I've been following it ever since the beginning (even if I don't always leave a review). It's gonna be awesome once the end comes because then all this build up and hopefully our patience will be well worth it. This story has been awesome and really well thought out. I can't wait to see what improvements are made to make it even more awesome. I'll definitely be checking back in your profile for updates on your publishing status. Keep up the good work!
Scales of Sapphire 2008-10-22 ch 17,	wishes_for_hope at yahoo dot com
Nerdy Wolf 2008-10-22 ch 17,	Could you at least let us know when you get it published? It's the least you could do after following it for years. :) Besides, when it gets published, I'd like to be one of the first to buy it!
PsychoticPyro 2008-09-22 ch 16,	...Update soon. PLEASE! This is one damn good story, and I'd hate to see it fizzle out when it's just starting to get to the climax. Just a quick query... About Eli, how he 1) has green eyes and red hair, 2) is a lot older than he looks, and 3)cares a great deal about Charlie. He's King Phillip, isn't he? Or am I just jumping to conclusions? Either way, I hope you update soon because I am loving your story. ~Pyro

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