i flew 2 this story wen i saw it sed "lesbianism." sorry. im not making a very gud impression of myself, being a pervert in my 1st review 2 u & being an even big 1 now.
well, it was very interesting & it confused the hell outta me. i ges i outta read... uh... something that tells me who the hell these people are. i assume of course that u didnt just make up these characters for a random lesbian story. of course, i could be wrong. u mite b a very random person.
well, it was good, & it gave detailed pictures (2 my horny mind at least), & it made me want 2 read more. so i think i will. til then!

-Dante

ps: so blaise made a girl str8? i know what that's like. i made a bisexual girl lesbian. *sigh*

*giggles* Ok, I’ll say it then since I’m safe in SLC. FREY!
Well, Ja’s special then. *wink * wink* LoLz, j/k
……?...?...O_o……?...?...
Oi, poor Nis…
Purring, LoLz… that’s adorable!
Hey, um, Bla is half siren, right? Aren’t they part bird? So, uh, cat & bird…
LMAO! I’ve made somebody say that to me once while, ahem, some person was in the room… I’m sorry you had to see that, Lafi
Lafi: I’m gonna l;eave the room now *has flashbacks of her own*
Tafi: Heh heh heh…
O, hands are awesome! I can stare at my hands for hours! *does so*
Oh… right… the story…
LMAO! Not many people would take that as a compliment! Teehee, I would & have, but that’s besides the point
OMG… that’s NOT what you want to hear when calling a friend
…it took Nis that long?
So… they aren’t?
LoLz! She IS easy! LMAO!
HA! I KNEW IT! *ahem. I knew she was bi. *grins mischievously & mysteriously* How could I not?

;P

bloody hell elfie!
thats just bloody distubing!
wot is rong with you
jez
oh eru help me!

LMAO! That was a funny little story. O my. Blaise, a lesbian?? Or..i mean, Bi? LOL! She certainly is unpredictable, no? Argh! i went to go read Treason and and and it was updated but my computer or fictionpress wont let me go to chap 5. ARGH. i am very angry! Lol! i guess i'll have to check back lataz *sigh* luv ya chic!! *hugz* luv this little story! its very funny!

Tee-hee-hee, you finally got round to writing it up. One problem, it's Dragonissa Aranwe, not Lunafire, i've scraped the Lunafire thing compleatly.

Gud gud story.

You tried to instil interest in a very prosaic scene by making them supernatural beings, but for me it doesn't work...too much obsession over lesbianism!