*stunned* no words for it Moj! Way to go!

x Chrissie

whoa.. this is good man.. real cool.. i like the last line.. n the overall rhymin n stuff.. Good job..

An interesting point of view. I don't believe i have ever read a poem based on this before. It flowed really well and it was intruiging (i spelled that wrong, i dont feel like fixing it lol)to read. It's very sad and...dark. i guess you can say. Great job!!

wow. very deep and very powerful. u have a way with words i could never have *sobs* and ur very talented. i loved this poem, it was very touching.

*lower lip trembles, eyes well up, bursts out crying* Oh, hunni, thats really beautiful! Oh! I hate you so much!! You're so good at everything! Fanfics, originals, poetry, songs! YOU **! You like making me jealous, don't you! I bet it gives you a rush! Hey, who needs caffeine of sugar when you can make Elfie jealous! You cowbag! I REALLY HATE YOU!
from me x