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| Angel Storm 2004-09-08 ch 7,   | I read the whole the story and I liked this one too. I really want to find out what happens to Linian and Jerren. A few grammatical mistakes but nothing to horrible. It was easy to follow and read the story flowed. |
| Christina (didn't feel like... 2003-08-21 ch 7, | Hello again, I forgot about this story...I'm going through and reading all of yours again. I love this one, it was my favourite before. Now Lady in Waiting is though. You should update this when you get a chance... |
| ~Mandy~ 2003-04-08 ch 7, | It was cute how u set up her first kiss and i like how u brought around the romance between Linian and Jerren. |
| Fairy Child2 2003-03-18 ch 6, | Hey, wow! This is really good! The format for the letters in Chapter 5 are alittle messed up. Other than that...It's good. Update soon! |
| Chaotic Child 2003-03-16 ch 6, | Real good! Update soon! |