and if all the worldis a stagewhy can't i memorizemy linesfor the next act

- i love that line(s)

very good poem, I really enjoyed it.

Depressing and cynical, but very interesting. I like your use of metaphors.
All I think this needs is a bit more formatting to give it some direction. It dovetails pretty well thematically from piece to piece, but sometimes the writing itself seems to stumble.
Nice work.
-JP-

Wow. Powerful **. Great. Superior writing. Hard to put a finger on what I liked most. Wonderful!! Write more!!

cool. i think it'd make an interesting painting.

That's really good.