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| super happy nuclear girl 2006-07-25 ch 1,   | and if all the worldis a stagewhy can't i memorizemy linesfor the next act - i love that line(s) very good poem, I really enjoyed it. |
| JazzPizza 2004-06-15 ch 1, | Depressing and cynical, but very interesting. I like your use of metaphors. All I think this needs is a bit more formatting to give it some direction. It dovetails pretty well thematically from piece to piece, but sometimes the writing itself seems to stumble. Nice work. -JP- |
| NovaKayne 2003-07-09 ch 1, | Wow. Powerful **. Great. Superior writing. Hard to put a finger on what I liked most. Wonderful!! Write more!! |
| target bath 2003-04-30 ch 1, | cool. i think it'd make an interesting painting. |
| Hopes Forgotten 2003-03-15 ch 1, | That's really good. |