|Reviews for Plastic Smiles|
| super happy nuclear girl 7/25/06 . chapter 1
and if all the worldis a stagewhy can't i memorizemy linesfor the next act
- i love that line(s)
very good poem, I really enjoyed it.
| JazzPizza 6/15/04 . chapter 1
Depressing and cynical, but very interesting. I like your use of metaphors.
All I think this needs is a bit more formatting to give it some direction. It dovetails pretty well thematically from piece to piece, but sometimes the writing itself seems to stumble.
| NovaKayne 7/9/03 . chapter 1
Wow. Powerful shit. Great. Superior writing. Hard to put a finger on what I liked most. Wonderful! Write more!
| target bath 4/30/03 . chapter 1
cool. i think it'd make an interesting painting.
| Hopes Forgotten 3/15/03 . chapter 1
That's really good.