*wipes eye* that was so beautiful! And so true... i really really liked it. it flows well and it just captures the reader. I can relate to it, in a way, and i love it! I love how you put aspects of nature into it. The rising and setting of the sun...the part in the trees, the earth, the sky. I LOVE IT!

very lovely. i liked it alot

I really cant say anything. I am speechless. All your poems are beautiful, but i can really relate to this (apart from the lover bit).
Luvs Elfie x
Ps. Thank you.