 Fallen-angel69711 2003-05-19 . chapter 5I know I have said I love your strory a few times to many but you are a good writer. I guess I envy those who can write really well because I flat out can not write worth crap.I enjoy reading stories. I like doing art work. Anyway I am getting off the subject of your story(I do that alot...sorry) Well I really do like your story please update soon. |
 reede-osidius 2003-04-23 . chapter 5hehehe, hurray u updated :D i'll be waiting again! i think i need to re-read this chapter, off i go! |
 Isay 2003-04-16 . chapter 4E! Cool. Update soon. This is interesting... ^_^ |
 Isay 2003-04-16 . chapter 3Cool story so far.. |
 Fallen-angel69711 2003-04-11 . chapter 4Love your story. Exciting please keep writing!! |
 reede-osidius 2003-04-05 . chapter 4i luv the way u ended it, thats y i cant wait for the next bit, so kewl :D |
 jerise 2003-04-04 . chapter 3Weird format... |
 shards of ice 2003-04-04 . chapter 3Hey, I missed an update! Please continue! :) |
 Fallen-angel69711 2003-04-01 . chapter 3I love your story. Please keep writing. I really wanna read more so hurry! :) |
 reede-osidius 2003-03-30 . chapter 3Your welcome! I didn't think it was boring! wait, or did i say that? i cannot recall, but i like this story :D its kewl, and getting interesting! i'll be waiting for ur next chapter!! |
 reede-osidius 2003-03-22 . chapter 2Yay! I'll wait for your next chapter, i could login for some reason... but neways, i reviewed last time, and i'm going to everytime u put up another chapter :D so keep up the good work! I like the sound of the fallen angel, really mysterious... |
 reede-osidius 2003-03-16 . chapter 1really nice start :D i'm intrigued! n i wana read more! :D so please keep writing~! |
 angelus cado 2003-03-16 . chapter 1Promising start. It was a good idea to give an entire story background, instaed of just launching into the story. Upddate soon! |
 J CAE 2003-03-16 . chapter 1My saying this is such a cliche, but it's a bit too short to comment on. But your story seems really interesting to this point. I'd love to read more. Please update soon! |
 Blue Elven Wind 2003-03-16 . chapter 1An interesting prologue. I can't wait to read more. |