|Reviews for China Doll|
| Midnight In Eden 9/12/04 . chapter 1
I like it...
especially the last line, except maybe they want to fix themselves...(just a thought)
| MistrissD 3/10/04 . chapter 1
The title was so intruging (spelling? way to early to think .
| NovaKayne 7/9/03 . chapter 1
Wow. Girl, you're just always getting better. I love your work, and I don't plan on screaming at you because you're a "lesbain." :D Keep it up! I need more good poetry!
| coldslit 6/18/03 . chapter 1
somehow this describes so many situations perfectly. well done
| suicidel angel 6/4/03 . chapter 1
short, too the point, and very deep. nice work.
| flash-rules 5/25/03 . chapter 1
Even though it's short, it really cuts deep. Really makes you thing.
| Nevermore Forevermore 5/12/03 . chapter 1
I like it. You're a good writer.
| Keep it 100 5/5/03 . chapter 1
Heart of the Sword
| Psycho-kyugurl 4/29/03 . chapter 1
Very emotional. REally.
| Princess Mulan 4/23/03 . chapter 1
Very cool ideas, I love how your portrait your thoughts on your friend.
i love the title China doll, too.
| aleppine 4/22/03 . chapter 1
I love this. Simple, so true, and meticulously worded. Well done.
| not sure yet 4/18/03 . chapter 1
interesting, like it muchly, the analogy or whatever is great, nicely done
| Nerilka-chan 4/15/03 . chapter 1
Nice job. Concisness is a rare tallent. It's nice to read someone who can get their point across in a few lines. It's comfortable in shortness. -Nchan
| Sarah Parker 4/15/03 . chapter 1
Wow, I really like this piece. I was expecting something long, but this works so much better in just five lines. It gets the point right out in the open, and I like that alot. I guess I can relate to both sides of this piece.. because I get so angry when one of my friends won't just tell me what's wrong, but I'm one of those people who never tell what's wrong so I don't really have the right to get so angry when they won't talk.
| MelodyReiterLee 4/13/03 . chapter 1
Wow, short, but good. _ Keep writing.