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Midnight In Eden
2004-09-12
ch 1,
abuseI like it...
especially the last line, except maybe they want to fix themselves...(just a thought)
.:midnight:.
MistrissD
2004-03-10
ch 1,
abuseThe title was so intruging (spelling? way to early to think >.
NovaKayne
2003-07-09
ch 1,
abuseWow. Girl, you're just always getting better. I love your work, and I don't plan on screaming at you because you're a "lesbain." :D Keep it up!! I need more good poetry!!

Alicia
coldslit
2003-06-18
ch 1,
abusesomehow this describes so many situations perfectly. well done
suicidel angel
2003-06-04
ch 1,
abuseshort, too the point, and very deep. nice work.
flash-rules
2003-05-25
ch 1,
abuseEven though it's short, it really cuts deep. Really makes you thing.
Nevermore Forevermore
2003-05-12
ch 1,
abuseI like it. You're a good writer.
Keep it 100
2003-05-05
ch 1,
abuseI'm speechless.


~Heart of the Sword
Psycho-kyugurl
2003-04-29
ch 1,
abuseVery emotional. REally.
Princess Mulan
2003-04-23
ch 1,
abuseVery cool ideas, I love how your portrait your thoughts on your friend.
i love the title China doll, too.
aleppine
2003-04-22
ch 1,
abuseI love this. Simple, so true, and meticulously worded. Well done.
not sure yet
2003-04-18
ch 1,
abuseinteresting, like it muchly, the analogy or whatever is great, nicely done
Nerilka-chan
2003-04-15
ch 1,
abuseNice job. Concisness is a rare tallent. It's nice to read someone who can get their point across in a few lines. It's comfortable in shortness. -Nchan
Sarah Parker
2003-04-15
ch 1,
abuseWow, I really like this piece. I was expecting something long, but this works so much better in just five lines. It gets the point right out in the open, and I like that alot. I guess I can relate to both sides of this piece.. because I get so angry when one of my friends won't just tell me what's wrong, but I'm one of those people who never tell what's wrong so I don't really have the right to get so angry when they won't talk.
MelodyReiterLee
2003-04-13
ch 1,
abuseWow, short, but good. ^_^ Keep writing.
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