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| Midnight In Eden 2004-09-12 ch 1,  | abuseI like it... especially the last line, except maybe they want to fix themselves...(just a thought) .:midnight:. |
| MistrissD 2004-03-10 ch 1, | abuseThe title was so intruging (spelling? way to early to think >. |
| NovaKayne 2003-07-09 ch 1, | abuseWow. Girl, you're just always getting better. I love your work, and I don't plan on screaming at you because you're a "lesbain." :D Keep it up!! I need more good poetry!! Alicia |
| coldslit 2003-06-18 ch 1, | abusesomehow this describes so many situations perfectly. well done |
| suicidel angel 2003-06-04 ch 1, | abuseshort, too the point, and very deep. nice work. |
| flash-rules 2003-05-25 ch 1, | abuseEven though it's short, it really cuts deep. Really makes you thing. |
| Nevermore Forevermore 2003-05-12 ch 1, | abuseI like it. You're a good writer. |
| Keep it 100 2003-05-05 ch 1, | abuseI'm speechless. ~Heart of the Sword |
| Psycho-kyugurl 2003-04-29 ch 1, | abuseVery emotional. REally. |
| Princess Mulan 2003-04-23 ch 1, | abuseVery cool ideas, I love how your portrait your thoughts on your friend. i love the title China doll, too. |
| aleppine 2003-04-22 ch 1, | abuseI love this. Simple, so true, and meticulously worded. Well done. |
| not sure yet 2003-04-18 ch 1, | abuseinteresting, like it muchly, the analogy or whatever is great, nicely done |
| Nerilka-chan 2003-04-15 ch 1, | abuseNice job. Concisness is a rare tallent. It's nice to read someone who can get their point across in a few lines. It's comfortable in shortness. -Nchan |
| Sarah Parker 2003-04-15 ch 1, | abuseWow, I really like this piece. I was expecting something long, but this works so much better in just five lines. It gets the point right out in the open, and I like that alot. I guess I can relate to both sides of this piece.. because I get so angry when one of my friends won't just tell me what's wrong, but I'm one of those people who never tell what's wrong so I don't really have the right to get so angry when they won't talk. |
| MelodyReiterLee 2003-04-13 ch 1, | abuseWow, short, but good. ^_^ Keep writing. |