I like it...
especially the last line, except maybe they want to fix themselves...(just a thought)
.:midnight:.

The title was so intruging (spelling? way to early to think >.

Wow. Girl, you're just always getting better. I love your work, and I don't plan on screaming at you because you're a "lesbain." :D Keep it up!! I need more good poetry!!

Alicia

somehow this describes so many situations perfectly. well done

short, too the point, and very deep. nice work.

Even though it's short, it really cuts deep. Really makes you thing.

I like it. You're a good writer.

I'm speechless.


~Heart of the Sword

Very emotional. REally.

Very cool ideas, I love how your portrait your thoughts on your friend.
i love the title China doll, too.

I love this. Simple, so true, and meticulously worded. Well done.

interesting, like it muchly, the analogy or whatever is great, nicely done

Nice job. Concisness is a rare tallent. It's nice to read someone who can get their point across in a few lines. It's comfortable in shortness. -Nchan

Wow, I really like this piece. I was expecting something long, but this works so much better in just five lines. It gets the point right out in the open, and I like that alot. I guess I can relate to both sides of this piece.. because I get so angry when one of my friends won't just tell me what's wrong, but I'm one of those people who never tell what's wrong so I don't really have the right to get so angry when they won't talk.

Wow, short, but good. ^_^ Keep writing.