| Reviews for China Doll |
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Midnight In Eden 9/12/04 . chapter 1I like it... especially the last line, except maybe they want to fix themselves...(just a thought) .:midnight:. |
MistrissD 3/10/04 . chapter 1The title was so intruging (spelling? way to early to think . |
NovaKayne 7/9/03 . chapter 1Wow. Girl, you're just always getting better. I love your work, and I don't plan on screaming at you because you're a "lesbain." :D Keep it up! I need more good poetry! Alicia |
coldslit 6/18/03 . chapter 1somehow this describes so many situations perfectly. well done |
suicidel angel 6/4/03 . chapter 1short, too the point, and very deep. nice work. |
flash-rules 5/25/03 . chapter 1Even though it's short, it really cuts deep. Really makes you thing. |
Nevermore Forevermore 5/12/03 . chapter 1I like it. You're a good writer. |
Keep it 100 5/5/03 . chapter 1I'm speechless. Heart of the Sword |
Psycho-kyugurl 4/29/03 . chapter 1Very emotional. REally. |
Princess Mulan 4/23/03 . chapter 1Very cool ideas, I love how your portrait your thoughts on your friend. i love the title China doll, too. |
aleppine 4/22/03 . chapter 1I love this. Simple, so true, and meticulously worded. Well done. |
not sure yet 4/18/03 . chapter 1interesting, like it muchly, the analogy or whatever is great, nicely done |
Nerilka-chan 4/15/03 . chapter 1Nice job. Concisness is a rare tallent. It's nice to read someone who can get their point across in a few lines. It's comfortable in shortness. -Nchan |
Sarah Parker 4/15/03 . chapter 1Wow, I really like this piece. I was expecting something long, but this works so much better in just five lines. It gets the point right out in the open, and I like that alot. I guess I can relate to both sides of this piece.. because I get so angry when one of my friends won't just tell me what's wrong, but I'm one of those people who never tell what's wrong so I don't really have the right to get so angry when they won't talk. |
MelodyReiterLee 4/13/03 . chapter 1Wow, short, but good. _ Keep writing. |