Ello. Tis me, Laura. I liked this. It was pretty. :)

I've never been one for angest, but damn...

I think I like your poetry as much as your story telling. It has so much emotion in it and it's something that one can feel. I like this one a lot, but you seem to speak of innocence lost (my eyes, used to speak of happiness... but now...all they speak of now, is of an endless pain,)and that's so upsetting...

I can't say much other than I loved this poem because of the flow. It wasn't necessarily perfect beat wise, but it reads like REAL langague.. which often gets lost in all of this angst

*smiles at the author's note* Poetry's kinda made for depression, though, isn't it?

This is a really nice piece, conveys the feeling of no-more-fight-in-me that I get so often.

hey there! i totally agree w/ ur a/n...i mean if ur gunna write something at least write what u are feeling. btw thanx for the review. mucho aprrecited...i kno i spelled that wrong :):):) cha cha dance! well i like the last part where it kinda ties together that u did it all for this one person...romance angst eh?? well nice job! ( i always leave long reviews...i cant express what i'm thinking in "good job" if i ever say that..virtually slap me!) c ya.

erik's tears

heh.. nice a/n. good poem. relates perfectly to me.. but i'm sure everyone says that.

very good! i like the lines... "the air is rushing past my face,my form, graceful and true..." keep it up! *LIZ*