grinning face of Death? ech, never wanna see that one...i like how you say "a hand" on its own line then you go to "known as Fate"...instead of having that all as one. this was good

color outsidet the lines

oh wow ...I like that one a whole lot...its really almost sorta scary ,until you show that if its not youre time to go fate shines upon you...rnrnrnrnrn

BATTLE! Thats the first word that came to mind after reading this! Oh the images! I am guessing either a car crashed into a body of water, because ,"A sound of breaking glass," or that could mean the sound of a hand breaking the surface of the water. Either way its a great visual! I am guessing this is not a suicidal poem, as the subject is struggling against the hands of death. Its an accident. Very well done, its a suspenseful story, much praise!

Jubei-chan

That's good, well written.

I like it, its different...keep writing your a great writer