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| Jugge 2003-11-24 ch 1,   | History repeats until you do something about it. Turn left instead of right. Also no one can read the future. Anything can happen. Like a friend who comes into your life and stays your friend >) Great poem! |
| Isarandel 2003-05-26 ch 1, | nice poem! :) and thanks for reviewing my story :) |
| Loganberry 2003-04-13 ch 1, | I agree with a couple of your other reviewers that this would make a pretty good song - maybe I'm just thinking of that Sting song they used to advertise Jaguar! =;) |
| hiro0911 2003-03-21 ch 1, | yeah, and you repeat too coz you did the same great job again :-) |
| Kurai Musoka 2003-03-20 ch 1, | sad... but good. I like the rhyme sceme, kishi-san! |
| Carter Tachikawa 2003-03-20 ch 1, | Has a nice flowy rhythm to it. I like it a lot. Maybe you could make it into a song? Anyway, keep it up.~CT |
| Aphy 2003-03-18 ch 1, | Oh wow, this was really good, Souzou! ^_^ *does a little dance for no reason* It makes a lot of sense to for I know what you mean. *needs to write more poerty* O_o ~Aphy |
| Val Mora 2003-03-17 ch 1, | This sounds more like a song than a poem, if you ask me. ^_^ I think this makes a very good point, not only philosophically, but one that is demonstrated time and again. ^_^ I like. |
| HisGirl201 2003-03-17 ch 1, | Hey Souzou-chan! *wow* your right! History does repeat..cool poem!Nicly written and everything!! ^_^ Great job, i loved the descritpions byt the way. Keep it up! ~*~IceAngel~*~ |
| Lunar Phoenix 2003-03-17 ch 1, | I really like this one. (Since I know what you're talking about and it's happened to me too ^_^') |