kawaii!!

This was great. From the not-mentioning-the-names to the I-know-how-much-you-love-it part. And it was so cute.

This was beautiful. I love how it shows how imperfect the perfect relationship can be. -faves-

that was beautiful.
it's like...you've been watching me with my girlfriend. i completely identify with the writer...so anyways, you've made my night. ^_^

aw
that was really sweet

Oh, God. How could I have missed this? Wow. It's ** amazing.


"All right, so I’m afraid to go out in public with you because I’m scared some of my friends will see me with you and find out we’re boyfriends. I know it hurts you, but what if someone doesn’t like it? What if they decide to get violent? What if you get hurt? You in pain is something I can’t stand. I know you think I’m embarrassed by us, but I’m not. Honest. If I could I would proclaim to the world that we go out, that you see something in me that you like. I’d sky-write it everyday and twice on Sundays, but I can’t."

That passage in particular meant a lot to me, because I tried to make that same point to my own ex-girlfriend. I don't think she really understood though, which made me kind of sad. In all honesty, she's really naive. She's SMART, but she's NAIVE.

*cough* Sorry. Didn't mean to go off on a tangent like that. Just wanted to tell you how much I liked this, and how strongly I could relate to certain aspects of it. (Though I always show affection with touching, not words, because I never know what to say ^^;;)

How come people can't write me things like that?
I loved it, it was the sweetest thing i've read in awhile.

OMG! I love this so much. It's sweet and beautiful and everything good like that. ^^

aww that was sweet ^__^

Ah, sweet! That was very cute. I'd love to see the story behind it *hinthint*

Oh wow... that was just beautiful. I even have tears in my eyes. *claps* Bravo! Wonderful! Absolutely heart-wrenching, honest, and sweet. ^_~

Wonderful. Very nice work, I loved the fact that you don't mention names. You're writing flows very well, it's a lot of fun to read. Keep up the good work!

wow you should make that into a story I know I would love to read it...but oh well thats just me... luv it lots R.A.