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BecomingMyself
2003-03-18
ch 1,
Why wouldn't it make sense?

You're back and I think it is good!

Dreams put aside to not be fullfilled to live life more empty than before and in the darkness for it is draining every emotion left to do so, never being what you wanted to be.
Well, that's what I read in your poem!
Glad you shared!
Hopes Forgotten
2003-03-18
ch 1,
That's good, well written.
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