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| Juine 2003-06-08 ch 1,  | abuseOy, i never like romance poety, but this one i like, it's not all, you know the typical pre-teen idolizing. But whatever, I like this one. Though, the "Calm as the ocean right before the storm" gives us a little foreshadowing, then contradicts the last few lines. Is this ment to be? Keep writing! |
| Needa S 2003-03-18 ch 1, | abuseExcellent! Keep writing.. |
| DragonsEclipse 2003-03-18 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful! This is a lovely poem! ^__^ |