Nice start, Jess! Now if you could just pick it up and keep going with something for once... it'd be awesome.

Luv ya, lady!

Hi Briah Keegan!
Come on, go writing! Please! You really need to do that! I'm waiting for the rest of the 2nd chapter and after that a 3rd chapter! It sounds really beautiful, eh, well, especially the Introduction. * blushes * I love thinking about magic things or something which sounds like that!! I couldn't review your 2nd chapter, I already did that! So this is my last review till your 3rd chapter, okay? Just keep on writing! I'll be cheering you on!! Bye and good luck writing!

* smile *
Tursiops.

Hey Briah Keegan!
I'm sorry to say this, but I always read the stories with no reviews at all to make them happy! I'm sorry to say that! I will review you now! Well, okay! This is true, I like the story and the words you use in it! It's very good, please go on with writing and would you mind to read my story, too? I'm Tursiops, my story's name is 'Feren e cindele sari'. Would you remember that? Just say 'no', no-one remembers it! It doesn't matter, it means 'Quest on Magic Wings'. Does that say enough? I will also tell you this, I read your story, also because I wrote some small stories (not real stories, but whatever) with words I really love! That's something like 'morning sun, golden leaves, sparkle of light, frozen water, waterfall, magic...' That kind of words. Do you like that words? Maybe I should write those small stories here on Fictionpress.net? Well, whatever! I like your story very much! Please continue!! Will you read my story? If you like it, you could go to Fanfiction.net! I've got two other stories there. My name's Tursiops, again. So, please read my three stories. (I'm not reviewing you because I want more reviews, but I AM short of reviewers...) Well, I will continue reading this story, so please go on with it!! Well, bye!

Tursiops.