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| servatis-a-pereculum 2004-10-26 ch 1, | Put this on fanfiction instead, people will acutally see this and read it if it was on fanfiction, then you can get proper reviews... ;-) |
| punkgoth333 2004-03-21 ch 1, | Hey... i read some of it.. i thought it was kinda cheesy.. then I read the reviews and Monster Man said that it sucked... so i look at a review for on of his stories and u said it was horrible and sucked.. that was as stupid as the story.. :-D |
| katharine Emily Francis 2003-12-26 ch 1, | The story is... well, a little bad. Not the writing. The way you wrote it was fine. It was just the people that I didn't like. Well you can't please everyone now can you. yeah and if you get a chance please read mine and review. Be seeing you. :) |
| FreeSpeech 2003-06-19 ch 1, | Well, I didn't like it as much as your other story, but I do have to admit, it is original, I enjoyed how you took the idea from a popular movie many people watch, and placed a popular person, the mix was rewarding. just keep it up, maybe it will develop into something better. ~~FreeSpeech~~ |
| Maria Snape 2003-05-06 ch 1, | A very good comparison to the ring. The Ring is my all-time favorite movie and my pen name was going to be Samara Morgan. I cant wait to read more! Keep writing!! |
| Isay 2003-03-26 ch 1, | I do believe you should publish this sort of thing in fanfiction.net. This is a fanfic. |
| Monster Man 2003-03-20 ch 1, | SO SO SO STUPID! THINK U CAN BE ANYMORE OBVIOUS! AND THAT EMINEM THING! THIS SHOULDN'T BE UNDER HORROR IT SHOULD BE UNDER COMEDY! |
| Dusty Harlequinade 2003-03-20 ch 1, | This isn't a flame. 1. This isn't an original piece of fiction. You should get in touch with fanfiction.net and ask them about putting a 'Ring' section up in movies. All this is is 'Ring' fanfic. As long as you have a story already written for whatever it is you want to see up there, they'll make a section for it. 2. This story has so much potential, however, the constant slang has got to be worked to a minimum. Also, you need to add a bit more details to the story. |
| oh what now 2003-03-19 ch 1, | Hey, it's pretty good. A lot of slang doesnt make it very interesting, and you need more details to catch the readers eyes. Great job by the way..please continue! |
| Flyyboy06 2003-03-18 ch 1, | Uh, no offense, but anyone who has seen The Ring has practically seen this. The only difference is that Eminem is the lead role and his daughter is there instead of the little boy and Brittany takes place of that one dude from the movie. You are a pretty talented writer, but you should use your talent on something more original. **Not a flame** Plz don't take this personally. |
| Thuggins 2003-03-18 ch 1, | I can't believe this! The Ring is my ALL-TIME fave movie and Eminem is my ALL-TIME fave musician, and somebody just happened to write my ALL-TIME fave genre of a story combining both of them?! This insane! But I love you forever! =D |