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Rightest Rachel 2008-11-12 . chapter 1
I’ll have to disagree here, but it’s so long ago, I am not sure you still think on the same line.
Ethne Lovegood 2004-01-24 . chapter 1
I like the end, about loving what it's supposed to be. Very nice. : )
musingofthesilence 2003-03-20 . chapter 1
You raise some interesting points, as Americans are considered terrorists to some, and also how our society is quick to pass judgement on what justifies our actions. I agree that the ideals of America are noble, but we don't always hold true to them, or support them in the way originally intended. But that's my opinion. I like any essay or writing that provokes halfway stimulating thoughts. Rhetorical questions are effective in achieving this purpose. Good work.
Ambriya 2003-03-19 . chapter 1
I published a response to your essay and some of my opinions. It's called "A Response to Terrorism" by me, Ambriya, please read it and review it. thank you.

By the way -- your essay is good.
Second 2003-03-18 . chapter 1
Hm.
I've got a few essays in the working that should answer a few of these questions, and I'm glad someone else shares my thoughts. I love the last hit on feigned patriotism at the end, and truthfully; I love you, Katie..or at least what I think is you.

Anyways, very nice.
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