Hey... not bad. ^_^ Ends a little abruptly, but that's ok. ^^ Just a few tips though: Don't keep on using 'he' near the middle of the story. Otherwise, nice. ^^

Interesting short.

COHOHOHOHOHOL! Nice!

another good one. keep up the good work.

This is good. ^^ You should make it a saga. That'd be cool.

Happy Endings...*grumbles* I don't like happy endings nice story though, you should have the hermit be a spy for the tyrant, and capture him and hold him captive. Descriptions are nice of the people but you might want to describe the world a bit more.

absolutly nothing wrong with insanity...or Elijah Wood...

Very good story! i couldn't anything wrong with it and i like the plot very much. i really like the names of the people and the dragon!

(thanks for the reveiw you sent me! it really made my day because it was the 1st one i got and i'm new at this!)

Nice story. Maybe you could try making a multi-chapter out of it or something. Maybe get more indepth with the rebellion and their quest to return King Roycell to the throne of Aradai and stuff like that. It's just a suggestion. Even if you don't take my suggestion, it was still a cool short story. Keep writing!

It's good, but sometimes, it's just told. you know what i mean? No offense of course. try to describe things more, it would make it more interesting!