Lots of emotion in this, very powerful. I hate men like that.

Hey, thought I'd return the favor and review one of your stories. This little poem is quite good-passionate and descriptive. I think every woman has felt this way at some point, and you do an excellent job of describing the anger, hatred and even the shame that can be brought forth by the lustful gaze of a dim-witted male. It makes me angry that women should have to be subjected to this kind of treatment. Anyway, great poem, I'll get around to reviewing some of your other stuff when I have the time.

Ugh.

I know exactly how you feel.

...that's sad

Good, excellent in fact, but sad. Not crying-sad, just ... 'sad'... can't explain it more than that, hopefully you know sort of what I mean.

~Elli

dude, I know exactly where you're coming from. 'Is there a man in this world who isn't picturing me on my knees? I hate the pictures inside your head ...' I think that sums up the experience so well. Very direct and raw.

"Is that what you call sexy?
A little girl in her underwear
Shuddering under your scrutinizing stare."
quite powerful language, i love those lines. i think its almost helped the poem that you wrote it in haste, you can feel the raw anger. very good...i would barely change a thing.

I'm very sorry for you experience. No one should have to feel violated. This poem doesn't suck. (seriously) All though it's something bad that happened to you, it's a very well written poem and I love it.
~Emaline

I know where you're coming from, and I completely agree with your poem! Great job!

Sorry that I can't make you feel better, because I can't make myself feel better. I know how you feel though. You wrote this very well, with so much emotion. I can't complain or even critisize it! Sorry that it had to come from something so *Scrunches her nose* yeah..

Tristen

I can understand your feelings. No one wants to be treated as a sex object. Not all males are that way.
many if not most accept you for who you are.

Feel better now?