 liz*a*freak 2003-07-17 . chapter 1 the whole thing puts me in that mood, u no that mood, and i love the last 2lines of that it rox! |
 mvdiva 2003-05-22 . chapter 1O...somewhat creepy. Kind of a "what if" to the "Lady or the Tiger" short story. |
 Ice Dragon (Maura) 2003-05-12 . chapter 1 The Hunter was interesting. It is obvious that you are the better writer then I supposedly am. I have a few poems posted on my site if you want to see them.
w.angelfire.com/realm/blackyluver/index.htm |
 StregaLuna 2003-04-27 . chapter 1hmm... very thinkie.. nice..
~stregaluna aka beans |
 killingmoonlight 2003-04-22 . chapter 1i loved the way you describe images for example: "Her footsteps echo in my heart and her whisper warms my ear." the way you blend words together is amazing... from this poem seeps irony...which is something i happen to like very much... i hope to see more of these from you in the future. -mere |
 Teratoma 2003-04-13 . chapter 1Wow I really liked this. The way you described everything was really cool. ^-^ Write more stuff like this.
-pH |
 X-ATM092 2003-03-27 . chapter 1Okay, now, I *never* know what to say in a review. Except, of course, that I liked it. If I didn't, I'd let you knwo. This poem indeed described a paradox.
I especially liked the part "Am I truly the hunter, or is she?"
That was great
Anyway, gotta go. |
 Vanessa Gonçalves 2003-03-20 . chapter 1 FREAKIN' AWESOME! Another amazing poem. "Haunting Paradox" Simply amazing. |