Well, that waz really tight. Liked it alot. Ur a really good writer, so don't stop!

very good! my poetry is always a little on the depressing side, with maybe a little hopefullness, but yours combines both very well.

I liked it! I read it in school i think...

wowerz...even though I already read it on yur profile long tym ago...keep goin! :)

-liquidgold02