ahaha
you are the greatest!
things that i liked about this :
1. HILRIOUS-NESS! yes, its a word!
2. puncuation useage
3. Vocabulary
you english teacher would be proud

Excellent poetry. That must've hurt immensely.

Cute poem! I'm always impressed by authors that can take such a finite subject and make a rhyme out of it. Wonderful work. And very amusing.
Wootang

Hello again! This is Neona, only I changed my penname(obviously). Loved this poem and it made me smile. I like how the rhyming was funny, but not childish so that it made it entertaining. Er, and sorry about not reviewing your Alanna fanfic story for quite awhile, I haven't exactly been on either FanFiction or FictionPress. Anyways, just thought I'd say loved the poem and you do have a knack at writing. :)

very good, very good. I like it a lot. you have a knack for poetry. Perhaps you are a teenage muse?

Death to the prickly pear!! LOL . . . Cute poem. :)