 ThirteenSugars 2004-11-15 . chapter 6Your essays are truly striking, and I did enjoy reading them. I actually agreed on some of the things you mentioned as well. I didn’t read all of them though. I just read about three, and all three were remarkable pieces of writing. My amusement was certainly tickled by some of your humorous jabs too.
I saw the professionalism and skills of a talented writer on the entire three essays no matter the fact that each piece possesses tetchy tones. At least, they were to me. There probably isn’t a style, but your method of writing is marvelous. Such brutal honesty is quite impressive and appealing to readers.
You are a brilliant writer. You would’ve also been a perfect one if it weren’t for the fact that you are not artless at all. But then again, nobody really wants to be perfect, not that anyone can even be.
I’m tempted to defend my own work of writing from your critique right now, but it doesn’t matter anymore. ^^
Keep writing. These are excellent! ^^
The most notorious stalker of F.P.
The most perverted untouched virgin,
- Wicked Tongue |
 Radyn is a bitch 2004-06-10 . chapter 1 You need to pull that long stick out of your ** and quit **. All you do is complain. Pple like you make me SICK!
I think I'm gonna THROW UP! |
 :) 2004-02-19 . chapter 1 The saying 'why take life seriously it's gonna kill us all anyway comes to mind when i read this (I've really got to figure out who said that) |
 fairiesrmean 2004-01-28 . chapter 6guy- *holds up three fingers* how many fingers am i holding up?
main charrie: three
guy-no, four! *hurts guy*
thats some creepy **... i hated that book. |
 cramer 2003-10-08 . chapter 5ha. |
 cramer 2003-10-08 . chapter 4This is exactly why i believe that all punks are exactly the same as all the little preppy girls with the gucci and prada and luis vuitton. Except they have vans and independant, and many other brands (i wouldn't know... im not a punk). Both groups also go to thrift shops to get what they wear. Its a little bit more expensive in the world of the girls, but its the same principal. All these skater punks are think they are better than "those preppy bastards" because they're going against the grain. HA. **. The only person i can think of that would be going against the grain... would be someone who totally defies all thoughts of "coolness", but is the 1st one to do it. All you other wannabe individuals are just conformists. Very nice idea in this one... i like it... keep going... |
 cramer 2003-10-08 . chapter 3there are exceptions to your rule. I'm too tired to rant and rave right now, but there are still people who do write/compose/paint/etc... with their hearts and not their minds. When you describe the art industry here, you are describing the masses, the majority. There are still those out there in the minority who have a passion for said things. It is sick what art has become, but all is not totally lost. |
 Starlight Maiden 2003-09-24 . chapter 6*coughs* Would it be rude if I told you that you were ** insane? In the best possible way..haha, anyway, I thorougly enjoyed this and you have this way of making me feel as if I have only one brain cell in my head and it's about to explode. I hope you do that on purpose. |
 fugiguru 2003-08-01 . chapter 2once again, this was great. i love your style and your honesty. keep it up! |
 Sariko23 2003-04-17 . chapter 6Your essay's are well thought out and written professionaly. I love how you get your idea's across. Although you did contradict yourself in some of the essay's it never took away from the point. You have skills! |
 Jessica Atkinson 2003-04-16 . chapter 6Good job with all of your analysis. |
 Sarah Louise 2003-04-11 . chapter 5you're insane. i love it |
 ellisa 2003-03-20 . chapter 2 you sound kinda mad- those penguins been bothering you? the first one was cool. |
 Nebulae 2003-03-20 . chapter 2I liked the first one a lot. The second one jsut sounded like you getting your ** out. But that's ok, we all need to do that. Or maybe it's just me. hmm...
Random thought: Why is life an ugly son of a **? I always thought it was just a **. It makes it more potent than having it diluted w/ male genes. |