I love it! I haven't finished the second chapter (short attention span). I just want you to notice the many small typos. You might want to edit or have other reread you're stuff. Just some constructive criticism. Really nice stuff, though.

Hey, great story so far. Very good and simple imagry. Keep up the nice work, I'll be waiting for the next chatper :)

Ici, omg- sweetie, I'm so sorry that I haven't reviewed this yet! ;_; I read it a while ago and just realized that I hadn't reviewed this chap of your beautiful story yet. ;_; But it's better late than never, right? ^_~ As always, wonderful story, my friend- and thanks for the special mention- I feel so loved! ::huggles self:: ^_^ Don't ever stop writing, as you're great at it...no matter what people may tell you...take it from a chick that knows great work when she sees it...you've got a talent and if you stay with it...I know you'll make it far out there. ^^ Thanks for the help with the penname last night..I'll be sure to remember what you said, as I know someday I'll be needing new character names. ^^ Thanks so much for everything! ^^

~Silver

PS: ::lightly taps Ici's shoulder:: Update! ::scurrys off:: ^_^

aw...that was so sweet. It is a really good Story!

it was good

aw...I really like this story...as it is with most things that I do read...but I really like this one.

Amanda
Aka
Flutter

Ici, again- you come back and amaze me! ^^ Silence and Sorrow are awesome! It's so sweet how they know they like each other...but appear to be shy. :sighs: Love. And their partners- Curren and what's the other one's name? Um- :checks back in story: Kellin! Man, how did I not remember that? I mean, Kelly is my sis's name, and it's close enough as it is. -_-;; Silver-baka! But ah well. They seem cool as well. ^^ But at any rate- update soon! I have to know what happens! ^^

~Silver

Aw Ici, you have to continue this! I love it, and the descriptions are absolutely beautiful! ^^ Man, now I'm jealous- you write stories so well! PLease update soon- this story is amazing! ^^

~Silver

this is such a nice fic! I want to read more! and thanx for the review!

that is SWEET. i want your writing style! write more! i love it so far!

Wow, I'm speechless. you're one of those writers where with like a sentence of a description I have a beautiful picture of what is happening and where they are and what they look like! OMG u had better update this fic, it's so good and I want to know what it is that she's stealing hehehehe! Evil child I am! I can't wait for you to update! TTYL!