This story was Ah-mazing! Theres not Words to Describe it! I really love this story... And Gavin charecter is Cool is a evil bad kind of way. I really cant wait for the Sequel and I hope you Publish this book because it would be a big hit! :D

-TiggerGurl

i really liked your stories but i felt like her relationships with the wolves and the way she coped and handled things was way too fast. i mean imagine some poeple are werewolves and you just find out. or when she just got raped. more raw emotions please! as for now.. i'm going to sleep man. i am so tired! i stayed up late finishing this story!

ohkay.

romance or horror? wrong section? i'll read on to certify for my own curiosity's sakes.

i like the way you draw the reader in at the beginning, I wish I couldd write like that.

If you have not posted the sequal, I may have to hurt you.

The story was absoulutely wonderful.
I only stopped reading out of necessity when I did!:)

My only compliant is that there were a few grammatical or spelling errors (little things like 'he' instead 'the' sorry a tinsy bit OCD... :])

And when you swapped to a different character in a different location there wasn't really a transition... it just happened. I thought it interrupted the flow of the story a bit, and that it could be fixed by something as small as a few dashes and a double space.

That's just me though...

Keep up the great work and I can't wait to reading the next chapter for Blood Doll, My Blood Doll.
:)
Rachel

That was AMAZING.

Is it bad to love Enoch?

it's good. realy good. it was hard keeping up with all the characters.. haha..

anyways... your writing is really mature and if the 'wolf politics' thing was true.. wow.. wolves surely are cool and smart and all that.

anyways.. as much as this is a fantasy fic.. it remained real.. although kacea being a goddess was a little bit surreal. anyways.. i dont know.. it just seemed believable, ya know? and the fic is really good.

it also has continuity in it, not too many details that some fics have that are so unnecessary.

you did a great job.

O, you have got o make another one, this one was awsome, i wanna se if gavin wil get o her, if not will he do somehing bad :O "gasp" (God im a bonadage sick bitch" XD anywho, i love the way this is, Kae will be more valuablee now since her powers awoken means mroe trouble, cant wait for the next one

interesting beginning...gonna read more so til then

Hell yeah!

I loved this.

first of all, I'll have to gush about how much I enjoied the story.

I thought it was like absolutely amazing and I'm glad that it came out of your head, and on to this site so I could read it.

Now, on to the more constructive stuf.I liked the way that you arranged the story. I don't think things were rushed so that you could finish the story like all quick and stuff. I like how the Loopa and Jinx's relationship developed and you know... Blossomed.

It was great. It wasn't to fast, and it didn't make me go God Damn it! Hurry up! I liked the way you sorta spread out events threw out the story. you didn't cram like a million things in to a chapter, nor did you stuff them with filler.

thanks for the amazing story, I'm about to go and check your profile to see if you've written a seequal yet.thanks,Nicole

You've come along since the the first story you had me read back in the day...ive read the first two its not so bad...had to be all cliche and make him tall though didnt you?...well anyways im far enough away that we oughta be able to talk again now lol...sorta miss ya and i just dont have enough fringe music in my life anymore...get ahold of me email or whatnot...hope to talk to ya CMF

just thought that i would tell you that i really enjoyed the story and all the twist thrown in and i really like the character develkopement even though in the intro the were some what cliche. but u have already addressed that issue so i wont go into it further, i wold also like to say that you have decribed many of the events incredible well and that i shall definaltely be reading some of your other work. i would like to say though that the only bit i didnt like was that you only had the bands both Kacea and Jynxx's only lay a minor role and they only appeared once well Kacea's at the end...by the way i really love the names that you have creater ofr everyone they suit the unbelievably well... i thinki should stop now so yea... ciao... k8t

Wow. Wow. I have read books worse than this little project of your's. Wow. You clearly loved this project from the start, and developed the characters well.

All that stands between you and publication is some minor edits that should clear up details and lighten up paragraphs. All in all a good year's work.

Keep On Writing!