I can't believe I read this and didn't leave a review. Why?? I really enjoyed it at the time, too. Maybe I was falling asleep. Perhaps as I read the last word, I dropped unconscious to the floor. It's the only thing that would explain it. And now to stop rambling and get to the point. This is a great story. I can't wait 'til she finally gets to the school but meanwhile, the journey is exciting enough. The characters are so different and so strongly drawn - especially Lrykkan.

Update!

this is awesome!

Ack. You've well explained his annoyance. ;D Is the bracelet related to Rynna's mage-necklace?

Hm. She's an awful bargainer, and has a very innocent view of city life. The stable boy could've stolen her horse! I'm not so sure I like her serious personality, but hey. Cemahla looks like he might be interesting. Watch formal language (sorry!!)

Wow. COOL perspective.

That was a good chapter, hope to read the next one soon. Good Job!

M! Interesting! Yes, I want to know about Cemahla and um, Lrykkan. Please write more!It's a great story! More, please, MORE!
SRoaB

Interesting...so the Elves and Humans are about to fight each other...

No doing anything with your left hand? Why? Was there some incredibly evil left handed person in their past, or what?

Why can't she take it off?

I like Lrykkan more and more with every chapter. He is a very nice and comforting person to have around.

Cemahla...fishing. I thought that I would be more surprised at that, and yet, the quirk strangely fits him. Cemahla. Hm. I like Cemahla. He is the only person around with sense.

Rynna is too experienced to have sense. She has good ideas, and is intelligent and all, but she's too unsure of herself to make a good leader.

That's why there's Cemahla. He at least knows what he's doing. He's also comforting to have around.

This story isn't going to end with her getting to her school, is it?

Rynna can sense that it won't, and she doesn't know what to make of that.

So it was quotes from HIM at the beginning of the chapters! Lrykkan!

He IS funny. His sudden burst of talking like an explosion in this chapter made me laugh.

It'll be really fun to have Lrykkan along! He's the best! ^^

He'd strike me as a wise arse, except that he really doesn't seem to know a few things. That makes him a very confusing character to classify.

The whole 'we' thing. That was truly entertaining.

Very interesting. VERY interesting.

I can't wait to see how this turns out. I like Cemahla already. He seems like he's going to be a very fun character. He's cool. ^^ (Imagining Cemahla in her head)

Rynna's a good character, too. I can't say that I'm wildly in love with the concept of her character, but you've got her well portrayed, she isn't shallow, and she provided definite and proper character interaction and character contrast to Cemahla. They're going to be great together!

Lyrkkan has quite a like-able personality. He(he?) reminds me of a lot of fun characters. I lovce the way you wrote the chapter. The first person narrative is punched full of character voice. I loved the Merlin thing. Merlin is my favorite person from Camelot.

It was good the way you ended it, too. The friendly prompt that the page wouldn't turn itself. That really illustrates the kind of character you've got.

I imagine things very vividly, and now I've got a voice for your Lyrkkan that I hear in my head as I read the text.

I saw your name from Hell no! so i checked this out. And i wanna say that your story is kinda slow...no offense and don sue pls..
i think ppl may get bored reading what they are talking about especially when they are talking bout things that won lead very far into the story...
however, i checked the whole thing out and i really like your idea of the story...i can guess pretty much...
probably ppl don really know what you're trying to tell in that...
speed up a bit?don abandon your story like the others okie?
keep it up...
regards...
ps:i'm authoress for 'when they are drunk' and vic romeo reviewed my story hence getting to know u. feel free to drop by my story sometime...

regards...

that was a great chapter. they just seem to get better with each one. I can't wait to read the next one. Where are the quotes comming from. If it is a book i would love to read it. e-mail me, if you wish, trinati2001@yahoo.com

Nice chapter.Oh maybe you should put more elves into it - they sounded interesting in this chapter lol. Keep up the good work!