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Liebe Sasa 2003-07-18 ch 1,	abuseThis story has a really good plot going. I'd like to see more of it. Just one hint though; you're supposed to start a new paragraph when a new person is talking. Kind of a silly rule, some people think, but it does make things easier to follow. ^-^ I like you're writing, and hope to see more original stuff from you. ~Mizery Rose~
Silverwolf Guild 2003-06-04 ch 1,	abuseHey! GOOD STORY! I love it! One question- did you take this out of real life? This sounds suspiciously like some of our conversations...quirks an eyebrow Or not. Anyway, the only thing I would change is that I would have the speech in it's own paragraph simply because it's easier to follow. But over all it's good! ^_^ Yay! -SG
Frozen in Heat (can't find ... 2003-05-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseawesome story! i decided to return the favor of you reading my story by reading yours.. yay! a nice reward for all my clicking to get to it! keep writing it; you're developing the plot really well.