i lurve this! really inspiring.

I have never met you but this poem leads me to believe that we may be very similar people...I have been through something similar to this before, nice work

the only crit I have is adding thee in the last line, it kind of takes away from the flow of the poem other than that nice job...

good poem

wow, it's exactly how i feel.
that was wonderful.

beautiful! i know what you mean, to some degree (i've only ever had one nearly-love crush)

Wow thats so beautiful so touching! spesh last stanza. you are a truly amazing poet.
Please review mine I could do with your opinion!

Very beautiful!You are a very talented writer.I love this poem,it was kinda sad,but wonderful :sigh:,I loved it!
White Pearl

Usually, I don't particularly like pieces on love and romance, but I must say that this was simply beautiful, both the poem itself and the thought it conveys.

im speachless, this was a great poem. thats all i can say really.

ps- please review mine, i really would love ur opinion

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful, BEAUTIFUL!

And the fact that I was listening to a love song while reading this made it even more touching... Aw man that last stanza is amazing...

Keep writing!

Hey! me again! This is another fantastic poem. It fits with me well. I hope you keep up the good work and keep thoe poems coming!

very touching with such beautiful emotion.

I know exactly what this poem comes from! wow you really captured the emotion. One of my favs!

Cele.

Lovely.. I like it..

very true, a truly beautiful, absoloutely amazing piece of writing