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| pendelynn 2003-06-05 ch 1,  | abusewe thinks it be great, really cute and I liked the ending thanks for reviewing me makes me feel importante anyway I loved the poem GREAT WORK |
| Werecat99 2003-05-25 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Simply beautiful. It felt like a dream, one of those in which you can feel the rush of the wind in your face. Good work. |
| La Luna Mia 2003-05-19 ch 1, | abusei have no idea where u get ur ideas! i liked this one a lot too (and i really enjoyed ur summery...hehe, it struck me as funny and i dont know why...) anyway, back to the point. it was extremely creative and i liked how you dont mention exactly what is going on until the very end. "A child and a dragon" well done. |
| Nevermore Forevermore 2003-04-23 ch 1, | abuseThat's good. I like it. The words seemed like they were made for each other. Good job. |
| Songbird21 2003-03-25 ch 1, | abuseNice. A few too many action words. I also wish you'd mentioned the dragon a bit more in the poem. I liked it though. By the way. I'm glad you liked my poem. :) I have lots of others on here. Just look in my profile. Well, I'm off to read your other stuff. *Waves* ^_^\/ |
| nightdragon0 2003-03-25 ch 1, | abuseIt looks great! All the words seem to fit in rather nicely. |
| Nasp Semeku 2003-03-23 ch 1, | abuseI love the way you play with the word and the meaning of the poem. I like it so much...hope you write more. ^-^ Fast blacksmith make fine sword, slow blacksmith make great sword, and lazy blacksmith make none. Apolyte the Thunderpaw,Arch mage. |
| Byrdde 2003-03-21 ch 1, | abuseOkay, I think this is one of my all time favorites. It's perfect! |