 Digsa2003 2003-06-12 . chapter 1Awesome! I especially loves thatit rhymes. Keep it up! |
 Catella Estelle 2003-04-06 . chapter 1Hehehehe! That was cool!
Green is an awesome color! Esspecially in the spring!
Great work!
~ Little Dog Muse |
 Needa S 2003-03-24 . chapter 1I like green! Thumb-up! Keep writing.. |
 Jade6 2003-03-24 . chapter 1I like this.
You really capture the color "green" in a number of different contexts. The last line especially was a lovely image. I also found that your use of rhyming was masterfully accomplished.
Overall, an excellent job!
Jade |
 Jonathan D 2003-03-24 . chapter 1Wow! I love the poem, it puts the reader in a happy state of mind! |