That is horrible when you can't sleep. I just read my geography book and I'm out in a count!
Great work!
It's an awesome haiku!

~ Little Dog Muse

Your poem is very true. I also wanted to say thank you for reviewing all my stories! :)

This is so true. I know and can sympathize with everyone who has trouble falling asleep. Sometimes I can lie in the dark for hours without knocking off... Nice poem.

Jade

Yup, I know the feeling all too well. You've got the syllables right and everything. Though haiku is normally about nature, this was really good. I can relate to. Keep it up.~CT

I can relate! Awesome job! Keep writing..

yes! I hate it when I can't sleep!
There are so many of us, I think we can have a column that is "sleepless nights Haiku" at FP.net! ^__^
hmm...if you can't sleep, write more Haiku, cause your haikus are really good and I don't seems to get enough of them. LOL
great job

I know. It drives me crazy.


~Heart of the Sword