awe, this is so sad. i hope your mom learns to love you.

It is I,yet again. My first thought after reading this was goddamn your life must suck. Good poem, sad, but good. Now I tell you again UPDATE REDEMPTION! GR!

I have felt this way on many an occasion with my step-father, all i can say is merely that I feel the same way.

Wa! It's so depressing. I can't believe your mommy is all cruel and stuff, maybe it's a stage all parents go through? You know like, hate your kid for a day, love her tomorrow. But I think she loves you deep inside, so don't lose hope. :)

this sounds like my relationship with my dad. nothing i do for is ever good enough for him. it's sad that things have to be this way sometimes, but i'm able to let out anger and stuff by writing. hope it helps you too. (this is good stuff. you're an amazing writer.)

Wonderful poem.

*sigh* I can relate very much to it.. except that I could never write this as wonderfully as you did. I'm quite impressed. You captured a lot and it flows to smoothly.

Sadly, I can relate...weh. I know how you feel. Great poem.

*cough*ANGST*cough* I like the poem, and I can see where you're coming from... but don't you think it's a bit over angsty, even for your mom. It makes me feel bad though, that your mom treats you like that. It's really sad... you should get counseling :p. (you're probably going to hit me with a foil for that comment)

I liked this poem a lot; my mother and I are notorious for our issues with each other, primarily over the fact that she hates me. I feel your pain, sweetie. Good work though. I especially liked the last line. Write more, and rock on!

~Lucky~

Well . . . *long pause* . . . that was morbid. Angsty and depressing and it sounds like something I'd write when I'm an unhappy person. Ek . . . doesn't disturb me as much when I'm the one writing it though. *shudder* Going to go listen to some depressing music now . . .