I'm surprised I haven't reviewed this yet; I told you a long time ago that it's one of my favorites.

I love the fluid rhyming, and the intricate portrait that you paint in this poem. Very well done. It's an A in my book. P

HAPPY BIRTHDAY! hehe just thought I'd get that out *_*

Wow, this is good. The rhyme is nice. Erk. I wanted to read more. _

Hey! I like this! It's good to have good poetry to look at everytime I come home. Keep on writing!

Very descriptive and good vocabulary

Metaphors? Weel, I forgot what metaphors are, so yeah _ Keep writing, because I love your poem.

Kaeda-chan

Love your poem! Especially love the line "With a hope in arms and faith in life's highs," but I don't exactly know why. Keep writing!

-bitter reminiscence