This is really great! I love the end how it's semi-romantic-ish... =p

::hugs::

Keep writing, for the love of BOB!

Poetry isn't really something that lends itself well to sense. It doesn't need to. It's intuitive. I'll shut up now.

wow. good job. you write fary nicely. good job. its really good.

Wow, me likes ^-^ and thankies fer ur review on meh story. I'm workin on the 2nd chappie but i have exams VERY soon and so i gotz to study n stuff...eevil school! =O! ^_^ ur a very good free-verse poet though. ::stamps poem w/ the approval stamp:: =3 Wee!

-=Kat=-

You know, I have a weird dream just about every night. Maybe i should write about those

hey!
i just read your poem. it's pretty cool. it lets you use your mind to create the heat and the flames. good job. only thing is that you shouldn't explain your work. the message or plot or whatever should be clear

Too lazy to sign in. ^^;;
But you have some nice rhyme. The ending sounds very nice.