Very powerful and well written. I love the description of dead nations and this Goddess, if that is what she is, of War. It was great how you didn't give her a side or ally in any way. This is a favorite of mine.

I love it! So dark and sinister, yet I do believe that her name is war.
- misplaced Vision

wow, that's deep. ...and that's all i can say, cause my brain is cramping now. *sniff* ur never online anymore! i wanna talk

This is extremely well-written, symbolic and beautiful (in a dark way). Seriously, this is an absolutely gorgeous piece of work. I don't find it confusing at all. I love it!

First of all, it's a poem if you say it is! That's what's so great... if you want your words to be poetry, they are. They may not be good, but if you want them to be, they are.

NOT that I'm saying this is bad! Because it's not. It's an interesting, and very dark, piece. One that I enjoyed reading! Thanks for sharing.

Very creative and simbolic but it is a bit confusing

Pretty, sounds like my kind of woman... bloody...

Ah... Weird... Dark... AH MY EYES THEY BURN! LOOK WHAT YOU DID! >_< Anyways nicely written and a bit to dark for my tastes...