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| Colastar 2005-06-18 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. You really captured the feeling in this poem. Nice words you chose with this, they fit in perfectly. |
| Belle Squared 2003-08-11 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. Normally I don't really enjoy free verse, but you did a good job with this one. ^-^ Lotsa Love, Princess Pinkie |
| SweetWithUncertainty 2003-07-28 ch 1, | abuseExtremely beautiful. Is this the same girl you wrote about before or do you have a thing for blue eyed girls? Anyway, keep writing. -SwimmerGirl |
| Ima-Wasteland 2003-07-13 ch 1, | abusebeautiful. a vision, a depiction, and a state rarely written from. ~*~erika~*~ |
| tahayov 2003-06-04 ch 1, | abusethis is unfair..i was writing a poem like that!!guess ill cancel it now caz mine could never b as good as this :)..anyway hope u read and review some of my stuff..it would b real nice of u.:) |