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| Guardrail 2006-09-19 ch 1,  | abuseBeautifully written, I like this a lot. Great work and defiantley keep writing! |
| corawellsome 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abuseDeep, and well-detailed, a powerful and good for people like me to relate to keep up the good work |
| Saranacian Freak 2003-10-26 ch 1, | abuseVery beautiful. I loved the imagery. |
| La Solange 2003-10-12 ch 1, | abuseVery mysterious... I like the style of your poetry, especially the rhythm when one says it aloud. ^_^ ~sol |
| Familiar Alien 2003-09-15 ch 1, | abuseDamn, you still got it... |
| Dirty Wallpaper 2003-08-03 ch 1, | abusethis would hvae to be the first poem i have read on fictionpress which has really really got me thinking. all through teh poem i was thinking about another poem i once read called "break break break" the authour totally slips my mind, i may be getting my literiture mixed up and know me i probebly am *rolls eyes* but it seemed to relate to it in several ways, not only in its images but in its meaning. my fav lines would hvae to be the very first ones because they addicted me to the poem at first site and i knew it would be good... "suffocating, i turn for answers/ the heart beats in slow motion/ the worls is dark;my eyes are closed" so wonderfully brillient and so original it blew my mind. im sure i will be thinking about this poem for a few more days from now, it truly is a work of art, kudos. |
| Anjeni Windsinger 2003-07-29 ch 1, | abuseReally now, why didn't I review this right away... Absolutely -amazing- poem. Incredible work. Keep writing! |
| karmakaze 2003-07-29 ch 1, | abuseInteresting perspective. Why did you change your name? |
| aleppine 2003-07-15 ch 1, | abuseI really like your style, and the way your mind thinks .., here is some lovely imagery in this. Everything you used to relate to the heart in any way was really nice. Still too tired to comment on the subject matter, though, except that it's interestingly unusual. Good stuff, dude. |
| Blissfully Unaware 2003-07-15 ch 1, | abuseThat was a really awesome poem! |
| Deana Bell 2003-06-11 ch 1, | abuseWow! This is great. I'm definitely gonna have to come and read this again. Beautiful, and with a message. ~God bless~ |
| cosmo-queen 2003-06-01 ch 1, | abuseExcellent poem. I had to read this twice before I fully got it and now that I have I just want to say this really made me think. I loved the way you wrote this. Great work, keep writing :) *cosmo-queen* |
| Lady B.V Rose 2003-05-30 ch 1, | abuseLike wowzers! Like totally brilliant...It made me feel like all the poem! *cookie* ~x~Nicole R~x~ |
| Sun Rose Fox 2003-05-25 ch 1, | abuseooh interesting. conversation wiv the heart. cool. nice imagery. confusing lies, makes sense, in that it doesnt. ;)there is nothing hidden that shall not be revealed. |
| CoolBeans18s 2003-05-19 ch 1, | abuseThat was very well written! Wonderful job! ~ CoolBeans18s |