Hey liz, nice way to end your story with a big fat: IMCOMPLETE! lol.
neways ur story is really good and i'm looking forward to ur next chappie.
Besides that I GOT BRONZE!
it's not really bronze actually it's more like pinkish/brown/copper/shit/like color.
Well i'm gonna stop now b4 i take up all the room in ur review section.

hehehehe...
(dont' ask)
anyways, give me a call some time and tell me ur next ideas and when the next chapter might come up ok. byebye~
:P

it's really good so far! i didnt expect jeremy to die, or even turn nice for that matter. hope you get to finish soon! i wanna read more!

yo yo! cool story, can't wait till next chapter! keep going

good fic! i think it's great and i can't wait till u put ur next chappie up! I LUV GIRL/BOY FICS! keep going!

Hey liz!
great story, i think u should put more stuff about what the scar is gonna do to the guy. Also i think hat ur ideas would b great but to put them GRADUALLy into each chapter to make the story hav enough suspense! KEEP GOING!

I think I read this before. Can't place when, but it was good. So, the perks about FictionPress is that there's a copy right at the bottom... Or did you write that yourself? TTYL!