White flowers - yea. The Chinese WOULD do that. (I would know) Chrysanthemums are so apropriate, eh? Why a funeral among ghosts, I should have hoped it would only be family. Or yea, i suppose friends of him and such. Well, er, a close ghost. Not so bad I guess. That means they understnad better!

I liked your poem!

-Faye Coon

oh my word...brilliant! i'm sorry i would offer constructive criticism but i cant :P the last two stanzas especially are inspired!

oh

that's so beautiful

*dies of speechlessness/an inferiority complex*

*forces someone to bury her grave in roses- so sick so ill from

randomly

scattered

chrysanthemums while simultaneously adding the poem to favorites*

*falls over chair* The image of his eyes that "grow large and ill, and photosensitive, and prone

to glowing like white flowers"

AH. *dies again and again and again*

i like this a lot. chrysanthemums are sweet flowers.

my only question is

who 'he' is this time,

or is it a general 'he'

and if so I think I want chrysanthemums

at my

funeral as well

just so I can have poetry

like

this

written about me.

EG