cute, cute, cute.

i love this!
what with the sound
and the description.
this is so eerie.
wonderful.

Grotesquely beautiful. I was literally shivering by the end of it.

Wow! Cool and creepy. Dolls, especially china ones, give me the creeps. Anyway, a nice poem. We are just like dolls in the doll graveyard, prone to being broken. Cool. keep it up!

this scares me.

consider your poem effective.

fear is good.

~chord

christ.

"whispers the black hole that is her face."

i like that. its dark and gorgeous.

ooh. freakily so.

reminds me of "gingerbread coffin," by Rasputina. m, great song (three chicks with cellos, what more could I want in a band?) [ahem]

yes, poem. I'm in love with your descriptions. why was the one at the top the hardest to break? (she's at the top because of it, but why?) bah, I ask too much.

I think we must all be traitors then.

~EG

dark. cool write! i like the images of the headless doll. deep. ^^;

Absolutely rending.

Ah God. I love this. "Traitors"...so perfect. I'm incoherent, I really am.

Beautiful and painful and wonderful

SNAP CRACKLE POP RICE CRISPIES! AHAGHAHAAHAHAHHA Great poem

Personally, I think this poem is literally awesome!