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| Dark-Passion67 2008-07-02 ch 36, | abuseNo! *cries* This was the best story ever. *sniffles* At least she told him she loved him. Damn, I shouldreally kill the bastard who hit them. Maybe not...but I'm rambling... Overall it was the best story I read in a long time. |
| Dark-Passion67 2008-07-01 ch 32, | abuseThis story is awesome! Can't wait to read the next one! |
| storys 2008-06-11 ch 1, | abuseOkay sorry for posting a review even if I've read this before. I just wanted to say that I think you should change the summary for this story PLEASE because i was looking through my fav stories and i looked at this and i was like, Mixed Signals...familiar. But I didn't know what it was when I read the summary. I clicked on it and when I read the first sentence about the pancakes I remember this story because every time someone shouts about a lot of pancakes I remember this story :D Did I mention I love this story? |
| Haruku 2008-05-16 ch 36, anon. | abuseThis was a really scary version of a cliche. You somehow included the homeless into this totally insane cliche and made it work. Argh. But I feel really annoyed over the ending. I mean, thirty-five chaps(and an epilogue) later, I'm STILL waiting for Gabby to finally officially get with Matt and...they die. It's like 'WTF?!' This ending was even worse than the 'He Punks Me Not' ending(at least that one had like a possibility). I'm just going to pretend they go to heaven, admit their love, get married, and have three kids(a boy named Crick and two girls named Jamie and SuLin). Oh, and Alice and Clark gets together and have an early marriage, resulting in triplets named Ed, Edward, and Eddie. Alice gets fat as a result and becomes ugly. Clark gets a potbelly and dies of cardiac arrest. Horus marries Roxie straight out of high school and divorces her two years later, after which Horus has grown pre-maturely bald and Roxie a Botox addicted housewife. ^^ I think too much. Anyway, the story was good. Nice drama, nice dialogue, nice pacing, smooth dialogue. Then it crashed and burned with the sudden ending. Still, it was good(that's what I'm trying to say). |
| leemya 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseHow can you just kill them? They were in a school's parking lot, how fast were the driver driving? How can you do that to Gabrielle's mother? Matt's mother too? But I must concur, that this story was really good, except for the end. lol |
| Irismanstealer 2008-04-06 ch 36, | abuseThat's why gabber didn't want to love him in the first place they always end up dying!Uh now im crying see what you did!lol |
| Teenaged Romance 2008-01-02 ch 35, | abuseI beg you...please please do an alternative ending...i know u finish this story...but really it was SO sad...I mean oddly (and obsessive) as it sounds...Matt and Gabrielle seemed like real people with a future...and yeah. So i will really...terrible...completely...love an alternative ending. |
| dreamcatcherxx 2007-12-17 ch 35, | abuseoh my god... i hate you! i hate you so much!! D:< you killed them(or is matt the only one dead?)!! but anyways, this story is awesome! (exept from the ending.) |
| bubblie130 2007-11-24 ch 35, | abuseWHAT IN THE WORLD were u thinking, however he story itself was really good |
| the wicked monkey 2007-11-11 ch 36, | abuseOH GOD! what were you THINKING? you killed him how dare you GABRIELLA AND MATT WERE DESTINED TO HAVE A FUTURE TOGETHER and you ruind it! shame on you it would be beneficial to your life if you never showed your face in public because If I find you, and mark my words, I most definately will I will avenge the death of my matty boy -- over and out The Wicked Monkey PS: I hope I don't seem serious. I don't actually want to stalk you. I have a life, you know. But Matt still shouldn't have died. -- over and out, this time for real The Wicked Monkey |
| Gentle. Edge. 2007-10-01 ch 3, | abuseHahaha Clark sounded like such a girl. :P |
| Gentle. Edge. 2007-10-01 ch 2, | abuseThis chapter really shows how much you've improved. :) |
| boreom-sucks-ass 2007-09-17 ch 20, anon. | abuseI hate it. the girl is so Weak. She's got no spine. |
| 0.0 NightRiders 0.0 2007-09-04 ch 36, | abuseu r so RIGHT that we readers are gonna flame you WAT THE HELL WERE U THINKING? THEM DYING? MATT SAVED HER LIFE 3 DAMN TIMES ITS SUPPOST TO BE HAPPY!! plus the fact that i really dont think that student are THAT stupid geez. u MUST change it. unless u did it to recieve reviews then...that pretty smart. STILL, i think that most of your reviewers hated the ending. HATED it. gr :P lol |
| xoxo1 2007-09-03 ch 36, | abuseyour story is totally awesome omg, the ending surprised me i was hoping for it to be like something that they would get together or something but its diferent, and i still like it =] |